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Forkbeard Jon's avatar

I really like your writing style in this, it's got that genuine pulp style through a kid's voice.

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Jolan Hildebrandt's avatar

I wrote it for a contest a couple years ago, but no one else entered, I won by default, (It's not how I wanted to win). I was inspired by Disney's Fillmore.

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